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Bass player

door killea

merciless in his song
cheered by the throng
blinded by his success
leaves behind the mess
now so wordy and cool
he plays some like a fool
unkind or just plain cruel
forgotten the tender care
that got him to where
he can have his share
his thinking all askew
feelings rage anew
sanguine with old crew
his comfort zone
where he is known
no need to atone

as he feels her cry
once apple of her eye
when questioned, why
then she would tell
she knows him so well
yet she knows him not at all
game now played, a different ball
he no longer hears her call

feedback van andere lezers

• Hoeselaar
  Als ik het lees zoals de vertaling me dat weergeeft, gaat het hier om een iemand die zijn verplichtingen niet na kwam. Ik meen taalfouten gelezen te hebben maar ben me niet helemaal zeker van
  
  Willy
  killea: thank you for reading me Willy
  xx
  j
• martine
  vol emotie
  mooi
  killea: many thanks martine
  xx
  j
• ivo
  diepdringend mooi
  killea: thank you Ivo
  xx
  j
• yellow
  like this?
  
  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vE3Iw4ZLtIM
  killea: just like this Marc
  xx
  j
• alie_jankind
  muziek brengt emoties omhoog ..
  mooi dit june
  
  groet
  killea: thank you alie
  xx
  j
• jan
  only the rythym needs some more rhyme...
  xxx
  j
  killea: Thank you Jan
  xxx
  j
• tessy
  Mooi J.
  xxx
  killea: many thanks Tessy
  xx
  j