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What do you see?
when you look at me
what do you see
do you shake your head
or smile gently
with disappointment
for all the chances
given and not taken
how often
was I mistaken
when you look at me
what do you see
do you cry for my pain
see the damage
look away in disdain
are you tired
of my pleas
to rearrange it
with some ease
are you angry
do I need the shame
are my successes
too minimal to blame
did I have to
bear the burr
did I exist
just for her
look at me, tell me
what you see…
as I struggle
not to sink into the dark
all I hear
is the tune of a lark*
* lark = song bird
lark = a joke; having a laugh
feedback van andere lezers- lief
eyes never lie June if you see what I mean...
xxx
liefs
killea: indeed, Lief
xxx
j - hettie35
Graag gelezen Killea, zo mooi geschreven
groetjes Hettie
killea: many thanks Hettie
xx
j - Dora
Nu de muziek er nog onder componeren, naar Celine sturen
of Aznavour ( leeft ie nog?) ,
Jammer dat Brell dood is
killea: Thank you Dora
xx
j - kerima_ellouise
heel mooi Killea en zoals Dora terecht opmerkt...het zou een mooie songtekst zijn!
groetekes
killea: thank you kerima ellouise
xx
j - marrik
Wat ik zie? Wel, dat zal ik je nooit zeggen.
Jer kent me.
HAHA
M
killea: I wish you would, someone needs to!
xxx
j - tessy
Zo mooi.
killea: thank you Tessy
xx
j - manono
Beautiful, Killea!
killea: Thank you Christine
xx
j - jan
keep listening to the songbird June!
xxx
j
killea: will do Jan
xxx
j
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