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Fire

door killea



she trembles with desire
burning up in the fantasies
he presents her every night
his hot breath she breathes
her body a canvas of clay
he paints and moulds
only to douse her
to incinerate in his fire

quivering thighs
she flies a little
cries a little
dies a little

still panting to the beat
of his crushing heart
smouldering coals re-ignite
he drags her back again
ever higher, higher
into the flames of his fire



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kj28soFeGl8&feature=related

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Mistaker
    Reminds me of the movie starring Nastassia Kinski.
    Beautiful poem June.

    Greta xx
    killea: Thank you Greta
    xx
    j
  • Dora
    burning burning, the whole worls is burning
    see me burning, we are all burnd out soon,
    like my neighbour, he has a burnout, hahi
    killea: burn baby, burn
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Ik zou wel een vuurtje kunnen gebruiken, zit met een verkoudheid en de rillingen lopen over m'n rug :-))
    killea: get well soon precious
    xx
    j
  • jan
    if you need a firefighter, you know where I am;-))

    xxx
    j
    killea: I know baby, but you will have to make do with one, threesomes are out of the question!
    xxx
    j
  • manono
    Can't listen to music right now ...

    Passionate love...

    'flies' ?
    killea: thanks for correction (shame on me!)
    xxx
    j
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