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Betere leesbaarheid

What if

door killea


The falling star disintegrated
before I could make a wish
my thoughts of you linger
and I wonder, what if

time and space a universal race
we go on living, thinking, hoping
history gone, here and now
we settle for what is

giving as much as we could get
no room for regret
and yet
it remains, out there, what if…

tantalising fantasies
the mind succumbs to flight
time not on our side
poetry oozes in metaphors

love knows no boundaries
regret knows only sorrow
here and now, and tomorrow
we look ahead and borrow

today passes in a second
each hour, each day passive
with longing for your face
absence makes the heart ache

a rare gift of living
with the time given
my heart bleeds love forever
my head screams, what if

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Dora
    Three poems in one
    heart ans head should not fight
    but in balance unite
    killea: it's a constant conflict Dora
    xxx
    j
  • Johan
    Wonderful poem but sometimes words force their existence, rupturing the flow and overshadowing the feelings they are meant to express.
    killea: many thanks for your insightful feedback
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Prachtig zoals steeds June
    xxx
    killea: thank you so much Tessy
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SsMo8UuB8XQ
    killea: we'll never know...
    thank you Marc
    xxx
    j
  • hettie35
    Hier wordt ik stil van,
    groetjes Hettie
    killea: many thanks Hettie
    xx
    j
  • jan
    better use a whishing well instead of falling stars June, they often explode before they hit the ground...

    xxx
    j
    killea: what would I do without your sound advice darling
    xxx
    j
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