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It is so still

door killea

It is so still

the night is so long
those who sleep and dream
are blessed it would seem

in the distance
I hear you call my name
in vain, in vain full of pain

I will come to you on the wind
with the sea I send my words
if you awaken, it is I you heard

so dark tonight no stars to ponder on
my love for you never wavering
the pull is far too strong

I hear the floorboards creak
as they do when you are home
imagination only, I am here alone

long before dawn
I wonder if you awake
send you a kiss your sleep to break

it is so still

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Wee
    So sad, and so beautiful.
    x
    killea: many thanks Wee
    xx
    j
  • alie_jankind
    I see you coming..
    rustgevend vers

    groet
    killea: thank you Alie
    xx
    j
  • jan
    only the lonely...
    xxx
    j

    killea: sounds like a song Jan
    xxx
    j
  • julien_maleur
    I feel the sadness in you words, but also hope. Your words tells me about someone longing for love.
    JM
    killea: my sadness at the moment is so deep, and longing so natural
    thank you for your fine FB
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Mooi gedicht xx droevig vol verlangen...
    killea: indeed Anne
    xx
    j
  • ivo
    de droefheid vult het blad
    killea: my sadness has no end Ivo
    xx
    j
  • martine
    de drang naar verlangen poŽtisch mooi neergeschreven
    xx
    killea: thank you for your fine FB Martine
    xx
    j
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