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Cactus

door killea

Cactus

Growing on the widow ledge
you finally flower so pink and red
reminding me of summer's promise
the ruby which should have been mine

so prickly you are untouchable
you have no sense of justice
the beauty of your flower
the only asset to offer

as I give you a few drops of water
which drip from the green wells
I want to touch you, let you prick me
let my blood and pain find another place

cactus you are so lucky that you flowered
as your time is overdue, I started
to dislike you intense, as I always do
but your flower is so tender

I start to like you again…it's insane

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • ivo
    oeps killea ... wat een gedicht !
    killea: thank you Ivo
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Heel mooi ...
    killea: thank you Anne
    xx
    j
  • werner
    I wish my English was better, but I enjoyed trying...
    killea: You are doing fine Werner, thank you
    xx
    j
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