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The woman of the sea

door killea

The woman of the sea




There where the water glistens
deep in his realms so free
he casts his net to catch
the woman of the sea

when she sings his heart is filled
his net as full as can be
he hears her words and understands
the woman of the sea

Ondine, was not her real name
but she came aboard to see
and he embraces her with words
the woman of the sea

she granted all his wishes
his life once more full of glee
desires left him cursed, bereft
by the woman of the sea

when she returned home to the deep
he, left standing under life's tree
he danced and sang alone again
for the woman in the sea

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Wee
    Wonderful fairytalelike. (Weird word :))
    x
    killea: Thank you Wee
    xx
    j
  • marrik
    Mooi, ben ik blij dat ik heel goed kan zwemmen. (lees zinken)

    killea: Will do, and thanks for the feed
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    I love this poem!

    Greta xx
    killea: many thanks Greta
    xx
    j
  • Rudolf
    Deze zingt ;-)
    killea: Thank you Rudolf
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Heel mooixx
    killea: thank you Anne
    xx
    j
  • jan
    superbeautiful June, we'll do the strand to get her;-)!
    xxx
    j


    walking and talking on the beach
    dreaming in the sand 'bout places to be
    with a wonderful woman of the sea
    always within reach


    killea: thank you Jan
    xxx
    j
  • ivo
    dit is mooi
    killea: thank you Ivo
    xx
    j
  • lief
    superbeautiful
    xxx
    liefs
    killea: many thanks Lief
    xxx
    j
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