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The waive of a wave
The waive of a wave
Fishing on the still waters
while there was a little sun
in the distance a rainbow
where the rains had begun
under a decrepit bridge
a mantel I thought safe
heard a rushing noise
didn't see the oncoming wave
by the time I did it was too late
deceitful wave sent me to my grave
foundered in the waters' cheat
dragged me down, so very depraved
a painful struggle ensued
swim so good, face was able to save
I fought like a fish with the current
gave it a sign I could easily waive
now the wave and the save have gone
Neptune flipped me up like a toy
and I am secure and relieved
clutching for a while to heaven-sent buoy
feedback van andere lezers- jan
what an adventure June, good thing that you didn't drown....
xxx
j
killea: I wish I could Jan, truly I wish I could
xxx
j - Mistaker
Such a lovely poem!
Greta xx
killea: many thanks Greta
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j - Danvoieanne
Beautiful xxx
killea: thank you Anne
xx
j - Hoeselaar
Und ich schon Denkend das dir das wirklich zugestosen währe.
Dies ist ein Traum in dem du dich auf hoher See bei Neptun befandst und der dir hübsch wie du bist direct zur hilfe eilte.
Schönes Gedicht
Willy
killea: thank you Willy for your lovely feedback
xx
j
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