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The waive of a wave

door killea

The waive of a wave



Fishing on the still waters
while there was a little sun
in the distance a rainbow
where the rains had begun

under a decrepit bridge
a mantel I thought safe
heard a rushing noise
didn't see the oncoming wave

by the time I did it was too late
deceitful wave sent me to my grave
foundered in the waters' cheat
dragged me down, so very depraved

a painful struggle ensued
swim so good, face was able to save
I fought like a fish with the current
gave it a sign I could easily waive

now the wave and the save have gone
Neptune flipped me up like a toy
and I am secure and relieved
clutching for a while to heaven-sent buoy


 

feedback van andere lezers

  • jan
    what an adventure June, good thing that you didn't drown....
    xxx
    j
    killea: I wish I could Jan, truly I wish I could
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Such a lovely poem!

    Greta xx
    killea: many thanks Greta
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Beautiful xxx
    killea: thank you Anne
    xx
    j
  • Hoeselaar
    Und ich schon Denkend das dir das wirklich zugestosen währe.
    Dies ist ein Traum in dem du dich auf hoher See bei Neptun befandst und der dir hübsch wie du bist direct zur hilfe eilte.

    Schönes Gedicht

    Willy
    killea: thank you Willy for your lovely feedback
    xx
    j
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