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Betere leesbaarheid

Alone against one

door killea

Alone against one


Miss busybody online 24/7
without knowing the truth
gives her opinions to the elevens
never have I gone for another's man
not like the one you defend
maybe that is what was the plan
find out the truth from both sides
before you try to give opinions
of the rollercoaster rides
find a love of your own and see
how you would like it
if you found a 'naïve' planner, like she
tell me, so I and all will know
how you would feel
to be treated like a sow
your writing so impressing
find out the fucking truth
before you start obsessing
blame lies with those you cohorted
so you can write poems
and the dirty truths distorted
before you write a memento mori
at least find out the truth
of the bloody story

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • jan
    you're not alone against one....
    xxx
    j
    killea: thank goodness for that Jan
    xxx
    j
  • anjer
    beautiful, a writers pain has so much to gain! grt Anjer
    killea: many thanks Anjer
    xxx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Beautiful xxx
    killea: thank you Anne
    xxx
    j
  • hettie35
    Heel vurig en open geschreven,petje af June.
    Liefs Hettie
    killea: many thanks dearest Hettie
    xx´x
    j
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