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My mis-take (song)

door killea

In the hush of the night
I hear your tender call
a touch, familiar, breath
there is no free fall

then I awake to my mistake
and in the gloom I call your name
again and again

where are you now, you hold my hand
the part of me, the pieces
can you feel it too my love
there are no quick releases

then I awake to my mistake
as in the dream I heard the key
turning in my door again

the moon and stars now watch
while I sleep, emotions are deep
on my face and pillow tears
I hear a scream as I weep

then I awake to my mistake
and in the gloom of the room
broken again, I break

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Aramis
    Is there any Paul McCarthy out there to write a song for this lyric ?
    killea: We shall see, Aramis
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Beautiful xx
    killea: thank you Anne
    xx
    j
  • Hoeselaar
    Nu nog de noten erbij dan gaan we gezamelijk zingen

    Willy
    killea: ja das tun wir Willy
    xx
    j
  • b_engel
    indrukwekkend
    killea: many thanks b engel
    xx
    j
  • jan
    cannot find one mistake in this song June, superb!
    xxx
    j
    killea: Thank you sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • tinucha
    very good, indeed :)
    killea: many thanks Tinucha
    xx
    j
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