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Southern Comfort (senryu)

door killea

Southern Comfort


one-winged swan cries out
there's a cold wind coming now
wish you were still here

feedback van andere lezers

• andremoortgat
  wish the sun came here
  (with the other wing)
  killea: the sun is here but it's bitter cold...
  xx
  j
• jan
  what happened to the swan June?
  xxx
  j
  
  killea: In the gracht there was a pair, one with a broken wing with just the ligaments sticking out. His mate found another, better looking specimen and left him to go South. So he just hangs around by himself.
  xxx
  j
• bragt
  mooi
  
  (vrije vertaling)
  de vleugels wiekten
  totaal niet meer g'lijktijdig
  zelfs niet beschuttend
  killea: yes, and now he hangs out with the ducks - see my repy to Jan
  xx
  j
• Danvoieanne
  Beautifull ...
  killea: Thank you Anne
  xx
  j
• johan
  Swans mate for life...
  killea: That's how it's supposed to be Johan
  xx
  j
• Mistaker
  Matthew's?
  Beautiful senryu June.
  
  Greta xx
  killea: many thanks Greta
  xx
  j