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Love (senryu)

door killea

Love





A sudden deluge
we ran home soaked to the bone
blinded by the rain

feedback van andere lezers

• joplin
  mooie opening voor een open verhaal
  xx
  killea: indeed Joplin
  xx
  j
• andremoortgat
  Was it rain (or love)
  to the bone?
  killea: both and neither (metaphoric)
  xx
  j
• jan
  you forgot your umbrella:-)
  xxx
  j
  killea: always Jan
  xxx
  j
• Danvoieanne
  Mooi
  killea: Many thanks Anne
  xx
  j
• yellow
  the rain in tears I guess? xx
  killea: No not tears, blindness....
  xxx
  j
• Annelies
  Love is blind, but feels so wonderfull when you only see the one in front of you :)x
  killea: INdeed Annelies
  xx
  j
• hettie35
  Mooie Senryu June,
  xxx Hettie
  killea: many thanks love
  xxx
  j