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Birthday number three

door killea

Birthday number three





Birthday number three
red-headed like me
you get what you see
abundant attitude, Yindi

Yindi, the sunshine
and you are mine
smart, charming, divine
bij mir bistu schein

your birth, I wasn't there
remember it well, the tear
and tears I cried in despair
wasn't allowed to be there

but you Mausele held my hand
walked the floor, did understand
took the pain, of the broken band
healing took place along the strand

now it's birthday number three
red-headed like your nannie
and like her, a little freaky
Happy Birthday Yindi

I'll love you forever, you see…


 

feedback van andere lezers

  • hettie35
    Stilmakende zo innig geschreven,
    xxx Hettie
    killea: many thanks Hettie love
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    beautiful poem June!
    happy birthday from me to Yindi to!
    xxx
    j

    killea: many thanks Jan
    xxx
    j
  • Rothe
    The mixing between english and german is funny !
    Heel goed en vloeiend geschreven. I like it !!!!!
    Happy birthday from me to the little one. Rothe x
    killea: It is actuallly jiddish (german bei mir bist du schoen - same difference). Thank you for your fine FB Rothe
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    I love this poem!

    Greta xx
    killea: many thanks Greta
    xx
    j
  • CHRIS
    lovely
    killea: Many thanks Chris
    xx
    j
  • andremoortgat
    Warm feelings
    killea: thank you andre
    xx
    j
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