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Betere leesbaarheid

Tides

door killea

Tides





So soon, so soon
the pain ebbs and flows
sea is cold as ice
as it sucks on my toes

at least there is some feeling
as cold as it may be
letting go is a must
there's nothing left for me

and as you lie still
in your silk-lined bed
your dreamless sleep
all memories are dead

but you will live on
heart hears you see
letting go is a given
though nothing left for me

except the memory
of curtailed dreams, love
your raw existence
soul on wings of a white dove

life goes on relentless,
with the ebb and flow
so long, my darling
weeping, onwards I go

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Danvoieanne
    nice xx
    killea: thank you Anne
    xx
    j
  • andremoortgat
    Onwards you go
    You'll meet ice and snow
    so turn ...on the crossroad
    to the sunny street of hope
    to much sorrow smells like "dope"
    killea: "dope" I am a dope, but I don't do 'dope', but maybe I should.
    thanks for the tip:-)
    xxx
    j
  • Aramis
    beautiful winter tale ...
    killea: Many thanks Jan
    xx
    j
  • Annelies
    What a beautiful poem about letting go. I can read it again and again. My heart hears the pain.x
    killea: Yes, life is so full of invisible pain, thank you Annelies
    xx
    j
  • Vardar
    very beautiful poems... but whether we like it or not, so we must be strong and stand the storms to conquer life!
    killea: Indeed, Vardar, it is a constant struggle to get over all the shite!
    thank you for your fine FB
    xx
    j
  • b_engel
    beautiful
    killea: thank you b engel
    xx
    j
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