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Tides

door killea

Tides





So soon, so soon
the pain ebbs and flows
sea is cold as ice
as it sucks on my toes

at least there is some feeling
as cold as it may be
letting go is a must
there's nothing left for me

and as you lie still
in your silk-lined bed
your dreamless sleep
all memories are dead

but you will live on
heart hears you see
letting go is a given
though nothing left for me

except the memory
of curtailed dreams, love
your raw existence
soul on wings of a white dove

life goes on relentless,
with the ebb and flow
so long, my darling
weeping, onwards I go

feedback van andere lezers

• Danvoieanne
  nice xx
  killea: thank you Anne
  xx
  j
• andremoortgat
  Onwards you go
  You'll meet ice and snow
  so turn ...on the crossroad
  to the sunny street of hope
  to much sorrow smells like "dope"
  killea: "dope" I am a dope, but I don't do 'dope', but maybe I should.
  thanks for the tip:-)
  xxx
  j
• Aramis
  beautiful winter tale ...
  killea: Many thanks Jan
  xx
  j
• Annelies
  What a beautiful poem about letting go. I can read it again and again. My heart hears the pain.x
  killea: Yes, life is so full of invisible pain, thank you Annelies
  xx
  j
• Vardar
  very beautiful poems... but whether we like it or not, so we must be strong and stand the storms to conquer life!
  killea: Indeed, Vardar, it is a constant struggle to get over all the shite!
  thank you for your fine FB
  xx
  j
• b_engel
  beautiful
  killea: thank you b engel
  xx
  j

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