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Hope

door killea

Hope




The more things change
imperceptibly or dramatically
the more they stay the same
what once was truly real
treasured, unforsaken
becomes a twisted memory
believable dreams are lost
for what they're worth,
dissipated, blown by the winds
to farthest corners of the earth
until they return, disguised,
clothed in another hue
reaching higher altitude
everything begins anew
wheel of life turning,
the paradox of Pandora's jar
empty, but for hope

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • andremoortgat
    In Nepal (2001)
    I found the wheel
    of life intensively turning..
    You describe it here as I felt it
    killea: thank you love, for your fine FB
    xx
    j
  • dichtduvel
    The end sounds kinky, but Im not sure, perhaps its only my twisted mind, j
    killea: perhaps, kinky, twist away, Jef
    xx
    j
  • CHRIS
    y 'm sorry
    plaese forgive my
    tank you
    love you
    thes are the special words
    God gave to us all
    chris
    killea: Thank you Chris
    xx
    j
  • lin
    Fraai klinkend gedicht Killea. Blijft er echt alleen hoop over? xxx lin
    killea: at least in Pandora's jar :) thank you lin
    xx
    j
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