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Betere leesbaarheid

Air

door killea

Air

There you are again
pulling me into your web
words that keep me tied
to your invisible thread
reminding of moments
of primal ecstasies
spelling it out in fervour
why it should not cease
though I tread with care
long-distance love apart
short sojourns, seem so unfair
continuously counting
the days before a return
of your personal (air) force
your words to be recreated
mine to endorse
married to the military
your power leaves me in awe
though as far as I'm concerned
you've won the battle but not the war
losing faith in me and you
yet you come back once more
tearing at the soul's affliction
I, helplessly adore...

 

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  • andremoortgat
    Yes... love is in the air
    killea: yes Andre
    "Love is life. All, everything that I understand, I understand only because I love. Everything is, everything exists, only because I love. Everything is united by it alone. Love is God, and to die means that I, a particle of love, shall return to the general and eternal source."
    Leo Tolstoy
  • Annelies
    you can't stop love, it's so strongful when two people feel the same.
    Een aantrekkingskracht die je niet kan ontwijken of negeren :) Beautiful... :)x
    killea: you hit the nail on the head, love
    xxx
    j
  • dichtduvel
    Primal ecstasies, personally I like them too much, though I'm not primal at all, I guess it's in the genes, j
    killea: indeed it is in the genes, darling
    xx
    j
  • CHRIS
    zwarte weduwe ???

    killea: perhaps..
    xx
    j
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