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I saw you...

door killea

I saw you…



I saw you in the distance, changed,
yet still the same
in the wet sand
I wrote your name

you seemed taller, rearranged,
at the place again
to see once more
now it seems insane

here we are so estranged,
out to the choppy sea
you looked afar
right past the ghost of me

I saw you in the distance, changed,
at your name
the water lapped
extinguishing the flame

it wasn't you
it wasn't me
it was the nemesis
of the sea

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vs0J9Fhx9wI&feature=related

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • andremoortgat
    I saw a cold Nemesis recently....
    called "winter" and she had no time to
    receive a waiting Spring
    killea: she is vicious this year Andre
    xx
    j
  • greta
    Wraakgodinnen? Die zijn keihard.

    Mooie tekst Killea.
    killea: indeed they are Greta
    xx
    j
  • dovan
    but it was me
    who saw you
    in words
    mooi
    grtn
    killea: I'm glad you did dovan
    xx
    j
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