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Piece (tanka)

door killea

Piece (tanka)





Missing you an ache
though I know there is no peace
for me from the cake

impatience is no virtue
I Generalize just wait

feedback van andere lezers

• andremoortgat
  A piece from the cake...
  wait is better than take
  killea: thank you my faithful reader
  xx
  j
• Aramis
  so give me a piece of the pipe
  and let's smoke together ...
  killea: hi stranger, you bring the pipe and I'll give you some peace. Oops I will give you a piece...what the hell, just bring the pipe!
  xx
  j

Enkel ingeschreven gebruikers kunnen stemmen.

Totale score: 5

Uitstekend: 2 stem(men), 67%
Goed: 1 stem(men), 33%
Niet goed: 0 stem(men), 0%

totaal 3 stem(men)