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Distance

door killea

Distance




always keeping us apart
my tears of a bleeding heart
past, present, but no forever
here and there days together
you do your best to come here
closing the gap to be near
defying all the time zones again
when you go, I feel how insane
this love takes me to the edge
and no amount of bets we hedge
will make it right, and all I know
is hopelessly, I love you so
let's cut the thread which binds
close our eyes, and blinds
you have amare infinitatem
we'll finish with a solemn amen
life isn't fair with a 'so be it'
I take the initiative to quit
as true as my tears flow free
I'll think if you as you of me
all what's finally left to say,
my beloved…goodbye...J.A.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2ntKgLxgY9s

feedback van andere lezers

• andremoortgat
  Your poem is closing
  the gap to be near
  'so be it'
  killea: Thank you Andre
  xx
  j
• greta
  De song is emotie, recht naar het hart.
  killea: Thak you Greta
  xx
  j
• bragt
  gevoelige, pijnlijkere interpretatie
  killea: it comes from the heart, bragt
  many thanks
  xx
  j

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