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peace of mind

door Fushigidane

a head in pieces
some dark and stubborn
some easy and restfull
others strange or worn

some pieces require the dark
most pieces are easy to keep back
most are hard to hold to a spark
hoping they burn without their shelter

most pieces are boring
not worth sharing
not in need of a spark
some not even worth caring

not the whole world needs to know
just those who manage to care
just those who do not sow
who aren't afraid to keep asking

just the mind can give one peace
peace with the neverending flow
peace with the impossibilities
peace which explains all there is to know

peace can be hard to understand
where does it come from?
where should it lend a hand?
who ever has the right to have any?

where should one let it lead
peace can lead to a lack of challenge
peace can lead to dangerous pits
but peace will also bring balance

peace comes from many places
a mind free to roam the earth
a mind accepting of all races
but most of all the option to let go

a mind can earn peace in many ways
my way is asking the difficult questions
my way not always finding the answers
asking takes moments, answering eons

my way makes me ask the why's
solitude lets me dismiss the mundane
solitude takes the scales of my eyes
making me king of my own world

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Vardar
    very filosophical and deep... a mind that wonders, a mind that doesn't sleep, a mind in which a dream turns to nightmare with ease if not protected by the shell of inner peace... be careful with all the questioning, you may come to a dead end and what will happen then;-) Happy to see some people dare ask, dare think, dare stay in the blank...
  • Ghislaine
    Indeed, and stay king in your world.
  • danvoieanne
    Zo is het inderdaad....vrede met jezelf is zeer belangrijk...
    Fushigidane: bedankt voor je warme welkom op deze site
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