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  • Francis
    See email
    xx Frans


    killea: Will do - thanks again
    xx
    june
  • Julien_Maleur
    lijkt mij spannend.
    jm
    killea: thanks

    June
  • Ghislaine
    Don't wait to long for the next part.
    killea: It is already in 'opslaan' and will go on at midnight. Thanks for reading my work.
    xx
    JUne
  • marrik
    It's getting better.

    ga door en niet stoppen.
    killea: Thanks for your support.

    xx
    june
  • klaver4
    Don't worry about me reading you! If I dig in, I dig in deep ! :o)
    Again splendind!
    For me, you have a lot of margin to make your stories a bit longer and elaborated, as the writing is sublime!
    ps's:
    He scramble => He scrambleD
    the boulder he had tried to move was still situated => does situated not need some additions, like 'at the same place'; of course, not being a native speaker (nor reader ;o), could be my English leaves me wanting...:o), so keep that in mind before being to harsh in your reply!
    xx
    klaver4
    killea: I'll have to check but not now. It is extremely hard to edit one's own work so I appreciate anything you point out. I try to be a perfectionist, but I am a speed reader and well that's it.

    thanks ever so much for fb

    xx
  • Ivan
    Grts Ivan
    killea: thanks
    xx
    j
  • Mephistopheles
    Thrilling!
    killea: Appreciate you reading me, Master writer, you!

    xx
    j
  • yellow
    mooi verhaal, hij vond nog niets,
    wie was die geest dan :)

    liefs,
    Marc
    killea: Continue reading and you'll find out. Thanks for FB
    xx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Kijk al uit naar het volgende verhaal
    killea: Thank you so much, Noel
    xxx
    j
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