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door killea

 

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  • Francis
    if I am playing classical music like that, I would like to be Beethoven
    becouse he was def they say..so I don t have to here her scream.
    Nice writing waiting for the next. xx
    killea: Thank you Frans
    xx
    June
  • marrik
    Erotic part.This one.But it's building up the plot,wich has to be great.I'm sure.

    Great writing.You must publich it one time.

    Up to the next episode.

    marrik
    killea: Thought you would get it. thanks
    xx
    June
  • Magdalena
    heel intens en boeiend

    the (very attractive) devil himself...

    XXXX
    killea: thanks

    xx
  • klaver4
    little erotic intermezzo as side dish...;o)
    Dennis wouldn't say no...
    :o)
    xx
    Dicky
    killea: Guess, it's his forte...
    xxx
    thanks for reading me, Dicky

    xx
    j
  • Ivan
    Grts Ivan
    killea: thanks for fb
    xx
  • Mephistopheles
    Most people tend to paint pictures of themselves they don't recognize...very good writing, indeed, miss De Jongh.
    killea: thank you Bert, I take it as a compliment.
    xxxx
    j
  • yellow
    My God....

    hot!

    xxx
    killea: thank you Marc
    xxx
    j
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