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Stake My Claim

door killea

I thought I knew it all
till you knocked on my heart's door
entered, taking me where
I've never been before
to places new for me
I thrill to be taught more
so I too can see
the miracle taking place
the reflection of me
in your beloved face
I'll never be the same
as I get through the night
sometimes still in pain
my demons I can fight
knowing it won't be long
your sweet words
making me strong
and as the day draws nigh
my enemy looks tame
can't help but sigh
say your precious name
hoping I alone
can stake my claim

feedback van andere lezers

• marrik
  Strong poëm.
  
  M
  killea: thanks you, sweet man
  
  xx
  j
• aquaangel
  ZO MOOI, als het in het Engels klinkt, de rijm
  prachtig!
  killea: Thank you Angelface
  xx
  j
• lief
  as the day draws nighT
  
  nice poem
  
  liefs
  killea: Thank you, precious
  
  xx
  j
• Francis
  something like the same way over here
  xx
  killea: good for you, darling
  
  xx
  j
• DeKoeneRidder
  I close mijn bij Aquaangel on. In het Engels is de rijm veel mooier.
  Love it!!!
  
  XXX DKR
  killea: Thank you, Braveheart
  
  xxx
  j
• jan
  until the next teardrops falls..
  
  xxx
  killea: That's always the way, Jan
  xx
  j
• yellow
  waarom doe je het gedicht nu weg?
  ik mailde je juist,
  
  zoals altijd vind ik bovenstaande ook zeer mooi,
  groetjes,
  Marc
  killea: thanks will put it back on now
  xxx