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Crystal Tears
Thoughts of him shot into her head
memory that long seemed dead
a song he loved and once shared
words he said when he'd cared
palpable intensity, underlying dread
fragile tug of the uncut thread
onto the floor fall crystal tears
shattering the silence, no-one hears
under his image the caption faded
what was written now so jaded
she can no longer comprehend it all
drama ended, curtain fall
crystal tear pervaded recall
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killea: many thanks, Secret
xx
j - jan
memories never fade away...
xxx
j
killea: unfortunately all the good memories have been slaughtered too, since my ex-to-be declared war, and that is very sad as there is no more cordiality possible in the future. Soon it will be over and I shall be out of this trying time. Thanks xxx j - Liesje
triestig, maar o zo menselijk... heel voorzichtig en gevoelig neergepend!
killea: Thank you Liesje
xx
j - GoNo2
Waarom? - Zingendevleugel
een prachtige bloem van een gedicht xxxx
killea: many thanks Diana
xxx
j - alie_jankind
de herinneringen die blijven komen
het hoofd vol doen schieten
met beelden van eens ...
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killea: Many thanks, Alie
xx
j - ivo
de mens zonder herinneringen is 'leeg' en leeft niet meer ..
killea: indeed, Ivo
xx
j - Jurgje
You got it cold!
killea: Indeed Jurgen, thank you
xxx
j - Klaver4
Saved by the bell I hope...;o)
The pain and turmoil cries out from every word.
xx
Dicky
killea: saved and resurrected
xxx
j - yellow
christal tears are sharp?
very beautiful June,
M.
xxx
killea: thank you Marc
xx
j
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